The two graphs below show the percentages of smokers and the consumption of alcohol in liters in selected countries, for the period of 1960 - 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The two line graphs illustrates the proportion of trends in smoking and consuming alcohol consuming of selected certain countries from 1960 to 2000.
In smoking figure, Holland had the top percentage with 60% in 1960, >> 반면에란 뜻의 while 은 앞에 콤마를 붙입니다 while this trend decreased steadily for 30 years from 60% in 1970 to 20% in 2000. The others countries, Japan and the USA, had a continuous decline drop from 50% and 40% in 1960 to 37% and 27% in 2000 respectively.
In terms of alcohol consumption, the USA had an experience of increasing over 20 years from 8 to 10, but it returned to 8 liters again in 2000. Holland increased drastically starting at 4 liters in 1960 to 11 liters in 1980. After peaking, it remained at about 10 for 20 years. Turkey had rarely changed at 2 liters from 1960 to 2000.
각 문단 첫 줄은 한 칸 들여쓰기 합니다 3문단을 구성하면 서론 본론 결론입니다 보시면 결론이 가장 깁니다 서론, 결론은 한 줄이면 충분합니다 마지막 단락은 단순히 나열만 있네요 분석 빛 비교가 가장 중요한 테스크입니다 두 번째 단락에선 Japan - the USA 와 Holland 를 비교했지만요 글자수 120자 좀 넘네요 테스크 불충족입니다
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