▶ Your Answer : The first bar graph illustrates that how many people got married or divorced in the USA from 1970 to 2000. The second bar graph shows that the status of marriage of adults in America in following two years 1970 and 2000.
According to the first chart, in 1970, the number of marriages was 2.5million, which remained stable in until 1980. However, from 1990, the figure declined slightly which was at around 2.3million in 1990 and 2million in 2000, (<-no comma) respectively. On the other hand, the divorce rate was 1million in 1970. While the number of people divorced rose to about 1.4million in 1980, over the next 20 years, the figures decreased, which constituted 1.1million and 1million, (<-no comma) respectively.
According to the second graph, the marriage rate was definitely high among the sectors. The percentage of adults married was around 70% in 1970, which went down to 59% in 2000. In addition, the number of widowed people widowed also declined from 7% to 5%. In contrast, the rate of never married people grew up from 15% to 20%. Similarly, the divorce rate increased as well from 2% to 10%.
Overall, as clearly seen from the two charts, the marriage rate tended to decline during the research period. Moreover, the figure of divorced people was same in 1970 and 2000, but the rate increased.
SCORE: 6.5
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