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The given line graph illustrates how the
amounts of consumption of chicken, beef, lamb, and fish changed over the
period from 1979 to 2004 in a certain European nation. It is measured in grams on a weekly basis per person.
As clearly seen from the provided figures,
beef was the most popular meat at roughly 220 grams. However, this trend was
reversed from 1989, overtaken by chicken at around 200 grams. The consumption of
chicken increased substantially from 140 grams in 1979 to 250 in 2004, with the
greatest figure at the end of the years.<(decrease of beef 내용도 전달해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.)
On the other hand, people consumed fish the
least throughout the entire research period. The figure relatively remained
steady at around 50 grams. In terms of lamb, there were remarkable declines in
the consumption from 150 grams in 1979 to 70 grams in 2004, although the relative meat consumption was the second highest at the beginning of the period.
As the statistics shown by, it can be seen
that the consumption of meat trends were varied by categories. Beef and lamb’s popularity fell significantly, while people consumed chicken much more as
time went by. <(good)
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