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About 40 years ago, people landed in the moon for the first time.
Since then, many people show great interest towards space, especially space
trips. It refers to the trip where people can go to the space and get on the
spaceship. Some entrepreneurs say this business of space trip will be booming
in the near future and will be the big target of development of space
technology. I agree with them.
There are many people who are interested in the space trip and
willing to pay for it no matter how much it costs. For a the long time, space was
considered to be the place humans were not allowed to go. However, only recently was it is possible for people to go to outer the space. Also, obviously, thousands of people dream of
exploring this secretive place where there might be aliens living. In fact,
there are actually tickets to the moon being sold in advances. From these
increasing interests in the space trips, this business will be the next hit in
space exploration.
The expectation of booming space tourism will ultimately change
space exploration in many ways. In order to follow the great demand of space
ship, the technology of space will be improved greatly. People will focus on
developing spaceships for regular people to get on easily without years of
training. They will make affordable and simpler but safe suits and equipment.
There will be a competitive environment for companies to develop all these in
order to meet huge demands. In the near future, companies dealing with space will
enable people to travel around the space.
To sum up, I believe the space trips in the very near future is not only
possible but rather popular. Also, in order to meet the demand of space trips,
space technology will be developed and specialized for tour businesses.
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