▶ Your Answer :
Many students
are educated to be better than others, rather than to cooperate with other
schoolchild for a common interest. This essay will argue the disadvantages of
this outweigh the benefits. The essay will first describe drawbacks that this way
of education could cause the weakness in team work and a decrease of
productivity in work environment, followed by the advantage of this method contained
dangerous side effects.
This education
method to beat in competition disrupts to adjust in team work environment. In
modern days, since almost work fields account for teams that need
collaboration. The ability to work together smoothly is very important in
society. For instance, to create smart phone application, designers, planners
and engineers have to communicate smoothly and cooperate together. If someone
wanted to be better than other specialized worker, the person will a disrupter
to success for the business. Additional, the competitive environment is not
helpful to improve productive. Because it causes stress and this negative
emotion make people exhausted and not to concentrate. For example, The Samsung which
is major company in Korea, estimate workers in relative evaluation. Thus, the
company is ranked in a top 5 of unproductive companies.
On the other
hand, being better than other could give pupils a sense of superiority and
achievement. However, It could cause from student losing a sense of empathy and
being selfish and unfair person. For example, few students cheat in exams or
competition to just win.
In conclusion,
the fact that learning work together is more important because of the benefits
of productively working in a team compared to the advantage that students feel superiority
of being better than others. |