▶ Your Answer : The bar chart compares the money spent on cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras in France and UK in 2010. Overall, the UK spent more money on consumer goods than France in the year given. Both the British and the French spent most of their money on cars, whereas the least amount of money was expended on perfume in the UK in comparison with cameras in France. The UK and France saw the highest consumption of cars at $450,000 and $400,000 respectively. However the next popular product in France was computers at just below $400,000, while the British spent just over $400,000 on books, which is the following greatest consumption in the UK. The expenditure of perfume was overwhelmingly lower than the other products at only $150,000 <(for what country?) and it was the lowest level not only in all sales but also in both countries. By contrast, the figure for cameras in France was exactly $150,000 and there was a $200,000 significant difference between the two countries. <(그 difference가 영국이 더 많이 consume한 쪽이라고 specify 해주시면 더 좋을 것 같습니다)
Score: 7 Comment: 잘 서술 해주셨습니다. Specification에 조금 더 신경을 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 문법상 글쓰시는데에 크게 문제가 없어 보이십니다. 수고 하셨습니다. |