▶ Your Answer : The chart given shows information on the preference on watching six different types of TV programmes by three different age groups that are 11 to 15, 16 to 20, and 21 to 25 in a single European country in the year 2012. These six difference types can be divided into two groups that are below 50% and above upper 50% of by the sum of preference percentages of the three age groups. The below 50% group are TV programmes A, C, and E that show a sum of 42%, 41%, 36% figure respectively, while the upper 50% groups are composed of programmes B, D, and F with a sum of 63%, 61%, 57% total preference respectively.
In terms of below 50% group, E programme shows the smallest preference by citizens with a total of 36% figure that is composed of 8% from 11 to 15 age group, 15% from 16 to 20 age group, and 13% from 21 to 25 age group. Similar with E programme, C programme's low preference rate was due to the bottom level of TV viewing preference from 11 to 15 age group.
When it comes to the upper 50% group, programme B and D gained large part of their rate by 16 to 20 age group with 23% and 24% figure respectively. Unlike these two programmes, programme F experienced highest viewing preferences among all the figures given from 21 to 25 age group with 26% figure.
Score: 6.5 Comment: 잘 정리해주셨습니다. 다만 Types of programs' total preference를 비교 해주시는 것 보다는 그룹별로 prefer하는 programs를 비교 해주시면 더 좋을 것 같습니다. Total preference를 꼭 비교를 해야했다면 total percentage가 따로 나왔을 겁니다. 하지만 그렇지 않고 그룹별로 선호하는 프로그램의 percentage가 나왔기 때문에 프로그램별 total preference가 아닌 그룹별 preference를 비교를 해주시는게 더 좋다고 생각합니다. 문법상 silly mistakes에만 주의를 해주시면 될 것 같습니다. 특히 spelling에 주의 해주시기를 바랍니다. 수고 하셨습니다. |