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The table represents information on the number of patrons
who visited a museum by age from 1997 to 2003.
Overall, the total amount of visitors showed an upward trend
throughout the period except for 1998. In addition, people who were 16 and 30
years old were the most important patron (비율이 가장 높다고 해서 이를 '중요함' 이라는 표현을 담아 자의적인 해석을 해서는 안 됩니다.).
It is clear that the oldest groups did not go to the
museum (여기의 경우 아예 안 갔다는 것이 아닌, 거의 가지 않았다 등으로 정확히 표현해주세요~) in that the number of visitors were only from 50 to 90 people over 50 and under 90 people
during the period. Moreover, although the second oldest group aged 46 to 60
dropped the place more than the first one (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.), they also did not enjoy experiencing the
museum. The figure for 2001 was 530 and that for 2003 was 940.
Commencing with the younger generations, it is notable that
22,140 people who were aged 16 to 30 visited the museum in 2003. (notable 이라는 표현을 사용해주셨으면, 이게 왜 notable 한지를 얘기해주셔야 해요. 여기의 경우 전체 수치 중 가장 높으니까~등이 추가되면 되겠죠.) The figure for 1998
was 17,490, reaching the lowest point, but the highest among the other age
groups. The youngest group was the second group who dropped by the facility,
accounting for 16,410 in 2003. (이 문장도 같이 댓글 주세요~) |