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The line graph illustrates the pollution levels of sulphur dioxide and smoke in London between 1600 and 2000.
Overall, the level of surphur dioxide was higher than the one of smoke in all years except 1950, but they had a similar flow.
Looking at the graph more closely, in 1600, both amounts of pollution were less than 250 micrograms per cubic meter respectively. After then than, the levels of sulphur dioxide and smoke had been gradually increasing gradually increased with occasional little drops (좋습니다.), and reached a peak by roughly 900 micrograms per cubic meter in about 1850 and 400 micrograms per cubic meter in about 1890 each. Between 1900 and 2000, there were was frequent fluctuations in the levels of both pollution. At this period, once, the amount of emitted smoke exceeded the one of sulphur dioxide in 1950 at about 300 micrograms per cubic meter. The fluctuations was going to decrease ,so in 2000, both levels reached at 0.
총평: (6/7/7/6) 6.5
요즘들어 이렇게 간단한 표는 거의 출제되지 않는 편이라, 점수도 그냥 참고로만 봐주시는 게 좋을 것 같습니다. (표가 이렇게 간단하면 수험생의 입장에서도 쓸 내용이 없지만, 채점관의 입장에서도 채점하기가 정말 어렵기 때문에)
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