Some people say that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that housing troubles and environmental pollution cause people
to suffer from ailments. As a result, many people argue that the government have
to spend budget on solving environmental and housing problems to prevent people
from diseases. I agree somewhat with this viewpoint, however, it can not be a
complete solution.
First
of all, there is no doubt that environmental contamination and unhygienic
surrounding make people to sick. The air pollution has a detrimental influence
on people’ health, especially for the respiratory system. Furthermore, numerous
people in developing countries suffer from the lack of clean water which is the one
of the serious problems in the world. Meanwhile, it is obvious that unhygienic
housing condition contributes to spreads of contagious diseases such as
Malaria, which was transmitted by mosquitoes. Therefore, the government should
concentrate on actions to enhance the quality of housing condition and reduce
the environmental pollution.
However,
the government can not achieve the healthy society with those activities and
should make more effort with other measures. One of possible actions to improve
the health condition of inhabitants is to establish the systematic healthcare
industry. The government, for instance, can construct a lot of hospitals in
each city and give financial support to universities which play an important
role on the training of healthcare workers. Moreover, the state should provide
vaccines to citizens which may prevent them from ailments in advance and
encourage the public to aware the importance of the public health by using campaigns.
In
conclusion, the efforts to manage environmental contamination and surrounding
problems are important but, not the only way to prevent people from diseases. Therefore,
I opine that the government should pay more attention to the healthcare
industry generally and attempt to inform the awareness of the public health to citizens.
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