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There are mixed opinions on whether or not
the development of technology has resulted in significant advantages. Regarding
this, some assert that it has brought a negative impact on society. However, I strongly
believe that the benefits of technological innovation outweigh the drawbacks of
it. The both views will be discussed in the essay below as well as my personal
opinion regarding this topic.
First of all, it is obvious that the advancement
of technology has led to a polluted environment. Air pollution has become a
common phenomenon in many countries, a significant number of people suffer from
polluted air created by cars and manufacturing factories in contemporary
society, In fact, China’s rapid industrialization has affected severe damage on
the environment such as deforestation which worsening the global warming. As the
example illustrates, the innovation of technology has resulted in serious
drawbacks on the environment and society as well.
On top of that, technological innovations
provide convenience and efficiency to the modern society. For instance, people
could fly across the world in a short period of time by air crafts. If there
was no the development of technology, people would not able to enjoy air travel.
Let me bring my story as an example. My grandmother had wanted to travel to
Europe when she was 22-year-old. However, she had got only limited time to
enjoy her holiday so it was almost impossible to travel by ships. However,
thanks to the innovation of technology, she could comfortably and quickly travel
to Europe by air. It is obvious that technological development has provided
significant advantages which make people more convenient compared to the past.
To sum up, although technological development has
negative effects on the environment, people take advantage of it and make ones
have a better life.
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