Your Answer ▼ It is a common belief that both endangered species and certain plants have protected our ecosystem from toxic air. However, other critics blame for other environmental problems such as industrial wastes generated by factories. (여기의 두 문장은, 이 글의 목적인 '뭐가 현시대의 가장 큰 환경 문제냐' 를 정확히 반영하지 못합니다. 그게 반영될 수 있도록 수정해서 댓글로 검사 받으세요! 어떻게 바꿔야할지 모르시겠다면 이 역시 댓글 주시면 됩니다.) I will outline both views and present my own view.
To begin with, without clean air, people would not able to sustain their lives. In fact, certain species of plants have a pivotal role to keep people safe. To be more specific, Irich trees can fully filler out of toxic air, refreshing air on a regular basis. Additionally, when logging and deforestation have been initiated eventually due to the outcome of industrialization, many people have got respiration illness such as lung cancer, and ashma. This shows that losing special trees can be vulnerable to the infrastructure of our ecosystem. (여기도 결과적으로, '그렇기 때문에 이게 현시대의 가장 큰 환경문제다' 라는 표현이 들어가야 합니다.)
Nevertheless, since civilization has been advanced quickly, there are a lot of factories and vehicles that lead to critical environmental pollution. Industrial wastes generated from factories might pollute the river, this will crucially threat to our daily life. Also, the main cause of environmental problems is to generate fossil fuel from vehicles. Emitting fumes can completely pollute air. This will lead to global warming so that people could not maintain their lives. For these reasons, I personally believe that monitoring factories and diminishing the number of vehicles is are more crucial than planting trees.
In conclusion, protecting endangered species of plants seems to be convincing. However, it is high time that proper regulation to both factories and vehicles should be implemented promplty. |