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These two charts below illustrate that how Australian households use energy and its greenhouse gas emissions.
According to the first chart, heating is the biggest factor of energy use of an Australian household, which is 42 percent of the total. Second largest amount is 30 percent of water heating at 30%. In addition, refrigeration, lighting and other appliances use each use 7%, 4% and 15 percent of total energy respectively. Finally, cooling is only 2 percent, which is the smallest energy usage of the chart.
There are changes of the list of factors<(원인들이 아에 다른걸로 바뀐건가요?) and their size on the second graph. Despite heating using is the largest amount of energy use, it makes only 15 percent of greenhouse gas, while water heating emits does almost same amount, at 32 percent. Surprisingly, refrigeration and lighting’s greenhouse gas emissions are double of its energy use. It is also a huge jump that appliance is the second largest factor, which is 28 percent of total emissions considering it being in is third important reason of energy use as 15 percent. Lastly, cooling creates the smallest greenhouse gas and the number of it is 3 percent.
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