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The graph shows information about species extinctions in tropical
forests>> 문제와 너무 비슷합니다 and the chart informs the reason why plants are threatened.
In the first graph, there is
a steady increase between 2000 and 2060. It is amazing that the figure is
predicted to rise about 10 times until 2060>> 콤마 빼주세요 when it will hit a peak at 50,000.
Although it will be decrease considerably less steeply >> 콤마 빼주세요 to 28,000 per million in the year
2100, it is still much higher than now.
What does catalyze this phenomenon? The chart takes a close look >> 어떤 뜻인가요? of
the impact of different types of activities on survival of plant survival. Clearly, over
three >> 대쉬 빼주세요 quarters of extinctions are caused by human activities, and more than a
half of this is related to some ways of to farming.
Natural events, on the other hand, have much less effects on the
lives of plants. Natural disasters, such as tropical storms, account for
7 per cent of extinctions, while other natural influences cause a further 11.7
percent. >> 11.7 퍼센트를 초래하다 말이 이상합니다 한국 말로는 가능하지만 영어론 이상한 문장입니다
To sum up, extinctions in tropical regions will get >> get 동사는 좋지 않습니다 much worse than
before they eventually fall. Meanwhile, human beings are likely to be
responsible for the greater part of these.
extinction 은 s 가 붙지 않는다는 것을 우선 말씀드리겠습니다 식물을 의미하는 plant 또한 s가 붙지 않습니다 Task1 은 세 문단이 적절합니다 비교급이 나오면 than이 나오는 것이 맞습니다 문법 부분들 많이 신경써주시길 바랍니다 Task Achievement - 6 Coherence and Cohesion - 5 Lexical Resource - 5 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5 5.0 예상합니다 |