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Nowadays, education for children has been important in many countries, while their parents are pressed because of tuition fee for their children. For the reason above, the governments of some countries support them to reduce their weights burdens. In this essay, the reasons why this politics>> 정치학은 맞지 않습니다 have more advantages than disadvantages are will be discussed.
Some people says that the politics>> 정치학입니다 for supporting education could be a significant reason that increasing costs of lessons and it will eventually turns back to them as higher fees >> 어떤 말인지 잘 모르겠습니다. Furthermore, it is clear that the way of supporting would raise>> rise는 자동사입니다 their taxes.
However, there are more important causes for the support. Firstly, the childhood is the most valuable period to learn something and easy to study. If they spend efficient time without any tuition because of financial problems, the talented youths cannot>> 붙여주세요 grow up and be influence people for the next generation. According to survey conducted by EBS, studying in childhood is the most efficient way to be good students in schools.
Secondly, everybody who pays taxes to the their governments ought to get >> get동사는 뜻이 많아 좋지 않아요 gain acquire 등이 좋습니다 opportunities for their children to be learned. Therefore, the governments should pay the costs instead of their parents and it could make the societies equal by the politics and it will be helpful to the nations. >> 문장이 깁니다 잘라주세요
In conclusion, paying the education fee of youths, >> 콤마 넣어주세요 instead of the their families, has many positive effects and the benefits would be risen, when the supporting capacities have been expanded.>> 여기도 문장이 깁니다
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