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This pie charts graphs show that the number of people at different ages (less than 14, between 15 and 59, and more than 60) who are from Yemen and Italy on the ages , compared the years in 2000 and 2050. The charts divided into three groups of ages, which are the young less than 14, the old more than 60, and the age between 15 to >> and 59.
It can be clearly seen that the number of young population decreases in both Yemen and Italy from the year 2000 year to 2050 year. However, the percentage of old people who are more than 60 years old increases in both of two countries thoughout the whole graph>> which graph ?.
It indicates that, in 2000, a half of part is occupied by the figure for Yemenite people less than 14 years old about 50.1% and 46.6% of the population is people who are them were 15 to 50 years old. In 2050, the percentages of young people become will dropping to 37.0%, but the percentage of the middle age percentage is expected to rise to more than half percent, 57.3%. Italian population chart is shown that while the occupancy of the old grows from 24.1% to 42.3%. However, the population of people who are young and between 15 and 59 years old is predicted to fall during for the period of 50 years from 14.3% to 11.5% and from 61.6% to 46.2% respectively.
아직 문법적으로 많이 약해 보입니다 단어 표현력도 부족하구요 글도 200자가 넘어갑니다 어떤 비교라기 보다 그저 나열로 보이는 형태이고 문장 구조들도 다 너무 비슷합니다 어떤 요점만 골라서 제시해야 합니다 문법 단어 공부부터 우선 해주시길 바라고 2000년은 과거 2050년은 미래 시제로 작성돼야 합니다
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