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The bar graphs depicts UK telephone calls by category; local fixed line, national and international fixed line, and mobiles between 1959 and 2002.
Overall, national/international and mobiles calls increased throughout the years for seven years from 1995 and 2002, while local call shows increase the increased for the first four years, but decreased for last other three years until 2002.
In the case of Mobiles, they started at the lowest point, about three billions minutes, and slowly increased. By the year of 2002, they rose rised up to forty five billion minutes of calls. Similar phenomenon happened to national and international calls. Starting from thirty seven billion minutes calls, the calls increased slowly. By the year of 2002, they reached about sixty one billion minutes calls. <(calls라고 해주시면 전화한 횟수가 됩니다. 그래프는 전화통화가 된 minutes를 보여주고 있습니다)
In the case of local fixed line calls, they started at seventy one billions minutes and increased for the first four years. From 2000, the calls slowly decreased and pointed to seventy one billion minutes calls, which was have the same as the starting point as it was in 1995. <(2000년도에 대한 peak point에 대해서도 정보를 주시면 좋을 것 같습니다)
Score: 6.5 Comment: 트렌드 비교 외에 순위 비교도 조금 해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 그 외에는 표현에 조금 더 신경을 써주시면 될 것 같습니다. 수고 하셨습니다.
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