▶ Your Answer :
There is the
argument that government have to invest for development of railways rather than
roads. I agree with this opinion because of two reasons that one is the aspect
of efficiency and another is for conserving environment. This essay will
discuss about these reasons with examples, followed by conclusion.
At first,
railways are more effective than roads in terms of saving time and money.
Normally using a railway is one of the cheapest transport and also this way is
able to perfectly avoid traffic jam that expends time to get destination. For
example, when I went from Seoul to Busan in South Korea by a car on a road. It
took at least 6 hours even though there were not serious congestion. However,
when I used train on a railroad, I could get back from Busan to Seoul taking
just 3 hours. Moreover, I could saving 20,000won compared to using a road that
I have to pay for fuel and passing tall gates.
Secondly, using
a railway is much more eco-friendly than a road. Roads that are used by
vehicles can cause air pollution and decline of fuel. For instance, emission
greenhouse gas rate account for 30% by automobiles and 25% of using fossil fuel
is caused by a car. Since the environment problem is considered seriously, many
social community and government are encouraging suing public transportation
nowadays. Using a car could be more convenient to move from a door to a door.
However, conserving environment is much more an important issue for human.
In conclusion, I
agree that government should to try for development of railways financially.
Because railways have benefits that is very efficient for saving money and time
and helpful to reduce greenhouse gas and overusing fuel.
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