▶ Your Answer : The bar graph shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational settings in the UK in 2010. Overall, Nursery/Pre-school is the most popular course for female teachers, while it is the least popular course for male teachers. About four percent of male teachers prefer nursery/pre-school course. As the course changes to higher educational settings such as primary school, secondary school, college, private training institute and university, the preference for males increases to as nine percent, thirty percent, forty percent, sixty percent and seventy percent, respectively. <(popularity/preference 보다는 그저 male/female ratio입니다) By contrast, starting from ninety-eight percent for nursery/pre-school educational course, the preference for females decreases as the education setting changes to higher levels. About ninety-one percent of female teachers covers the primary school course and as the education changes to secondary school, college, private training institute and university, the preference for female teachers decreases to as fifty-one percent, fifty percent, forty-nine percent and thirty percent, respectively.
Score: 6.5 Comment: 이것이 male/female teachers의 preference인지 popularity인지는 잘 알지 못합니다. 그래프는 그저 각 education level의 남여 선생님의 ratio/percentage만 보여주고 있습니다. Reader가 정보가 잘못 이해됬다고 생각을 하거나 잘못된 정보가 전달이 됬다고 생각을 하면 패널티가 적용이 될 수 있습니다. 그 외에는 정보를 잘 정리를해서 전달을 해주셨고 그래프를 잘 이해하신 것 같습니다. 비교를 조금 더 해주시면 더 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고 하셨습니다. |