▶ Your Answer :
In contemporary
society, it is common to see international companies in low- and middle-income
countries. Although this can bring economic benefits, serious problems on to
the environment are observed in such countries. The international companies
have brought economical benefits on the developing countries. More local people
will have jobs by hiring from newly built large factories, which leads them to
have income to spend on products in the local markets and will boost domestic
economy. The increase of demands on the local products by incoming of foreigners
for the jobs will also lead to have economic impacts. For example, after
operating Samsung’s factories in Vietnam, Vietnamese economic values have increased
more 30 percent more than before due to the expenditures of international employees
and domestic workers’ income. However, operating
international companies in developing countries has also brought serious
problems on the local communities, particularly on the environment. Many developing
countries have no laws and regulations on the protection of the environment
compared with developed countries where they regulate companies by their environmental
laws. The international companies will tend to throw out “bad” chemicals in
rivers or streams without cleaning due to lack of regulations. In Bangladesh,
where many a lot of multinational companies are located, many animals and fishes
have died after drinking the polluted water from the rivers. Despite this, the
companies denied to take any responsibility of the adverse impacts on the environment
because it is not written in the local laws and policies. <(강 외에 또 다른 하나의 environmental disadvantage을 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다)
In conclusion,
although international companies encourage the local economy of the developing
countries, there are several drawbacks on the natural world. Therefore, it is
recommended that those companies should take more responsibility on the local
communities for their future.
Score: 8 Comment: Persuasive하게 잘 서술해주셨습니다. A lot of는 informal한 표현이기 때문에 안 써주시는게 좋습니다. 수고 하셨습니다.
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