▶ Your Answer :
Due to activities of human, the earth can
become difficult to live in. Some people would claim that living in other
planets is the only way to solve this issue. However, I believe that even if
people live in other planets would have the same consequences. Therefore, the
government should fix the Earth's issue before going to other planets.
Currently people cannot live on Earth,
because the human activities. Due to the fossil gases release, the degradation
of land, and the civilisation infrastructures might be seen as the example of
human activities. Therefore, these damages should be cured. The Earth should be
recovered fully so that people can live.
Residing in other planet would face the
same consequences, because all the same facilities and services are needed in
that planet. In order to reside in other planet, people would have to go
through the same processes as the one in Earth. Therefore, the newer
environment will not be able to live in.
A space research is needed. If the space
research is conducted to improve people's entertainment and knowledge, it
should be supported. However, searching for other planets to reside can be seen
as avoiding the issues. Escaping the problems would never be able to solve
anything. By residing other planets will be face the same problem because
solving the Earth is just a matter of time. (이부분을 전문단과 연결해서 쓰는 것이 나을까요?)
In conclusion, moving to a new environment
is not the most effective way to solve the issue, because the new environment
will be damaged. The only way to solve this can be achieved by admitting all
the damages and finding the way to cure the Earth. |