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People usually have usually divided views on the
influence of living in a foreign country speaking their nation’s language. Some
old fashioned people think that living in such a country with their language
makes people confused of their original identity identity of their original country and mother tongue.
In contrast, I disagree with the idea that inhabiting other countries plays a
crucial role in developing my views on various fields with two main reasons.
To begin with, I can learn and acquire many
things throughout their culture and language. (굳이 I 로 한정지을 필요는 없습니다.) To be specific, making new
friends in the others country using their language is likely to have close
relationship with them and experiencing other cultures broadens my perspective
Both comprehension and admiration of diversity. (여기도 my 로 한정지을 필요 없고, 대소문자 구분에 주의해주세요~또한 문장이 조금 꼬였기 때문에 의도하신 의미를 댓글 주시면 수정해드리겠습니다.)
Another significant reason is that speaking
bilingual is beneficial to get a better occupation. People who live in other
country with foreign language (일단 other 가 아니라 another 가 맞고, 이 표현 자체가 글에 상당히 많이 보이고 있기 때문에 대체재를 찾아주셔야 합니다.) have a substantial merit to acquire good
opportunities. Also, they always open a door to get lots of suggestions at the
global job market. It is more advantageous rather than speaking only first
language.
In conclusion, living in another country with
foreign language provides people with relationship and global social skills,
learning other culture, and getting a better job. As discussed above, I
disagree with the idea dwellers in foreign countries with no mother tongue can
invoke critical situation and problems.
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