The number of people who decide not to have children has increased greatly.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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It is a common belief that deciding not to give birth son or daughter negatively affects our community. However, there is a more persuasive argument that the positive effects outweigh the negative effects. This is because society with fewer children can provide better education and childcare.
On the one hand, society with decrease the number of children would lead to labor shortage. Contemporary society have problem about labor shortage because of increasing a childless couple. If these couples grow more, the number of available workers will eventually decrease. As a result, society will bring more and more chaos. In Japan, for example, since 2002, the number of baby has been decreasing due to the birth of childless couples culture. In the end, Japan suffers from problems at many companies and government departments due to lack of workforce, and Japan continues to promote childbirth. However, it is not easily resolved until now.
Nevertheless, society with lower birthrate can provide better livelihood to young people. Every year the government sets aside funds for the education and childcare of children. The funds are limited. Therefore, with fewer young students, schools can offer better welfare with the same amount of resources. In Korea, for instant, the prestigious schools, known as good education, admit a small number of students. Because with the same resources, their schools can offer more intensive and deepened education through diverse educational methods. Also, it is likely that students from these schools are more professional and are in a higher position in society.
To sum up, while there are some negative effects to an increases in childless couples, it is evident that are more positive effects to a decrease birthrate.
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