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■ You should spend about 40 minutes on this task ■ Write about the following topic ■ Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience ■ Write at least 250 words | |
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Topic :
Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? | |
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There are a lot of products in this society and various advertisements to improve the sale of products in these days. Companies increase their profits Some products have the high sales through by using beautiful and fantastic advertisement. which are deluding consumers into purchasing.. It means that the advertisement has a great impact on sales volume of products. From my point of view, It is definitely true that the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising. In this essay, I will give some reasons and examples for this opinion.
One of the biggest industries is a the advertising industry in modern society. It is very important industry in this society.
This is because it related with the sale of goods and profit of company directly. Most advertisements explain only advantages of goods using mass media, such as TV, radio and internet. Advertisement has the power to control people's mind.
뭔가 문단문단마다 아쉽네요, develop덜된 느낌,
Some people insist that the high sales of goods depend on the power of advertisement,
not the real needs of the society. I think that is true, because what has been shown in the advertisement may not be true at all.
문단마음대로 나누지 마시고, 바디가 2개아니면 3개 이렇게 만들어 주세요 For example, I once have purchased some clothes using internet. Unfortunately, when I received my clothes, I found out the clothes are were of poor quality. It is so different from advertisement I have seen. After that time, I never purchase goods using internet because the advertisements are not true at all.
To sum up, advertisement is a very useful tool for us to understand feature of goods. Ironically, people should not believe advertisement only because the advertisement may not be true. Therefore, I think that people should purchase goods sold at the market by real needs of us. It is a good way to purchase goods in this society on which advertisement has a great influence.
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