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■ You should spend about 40 minutes on this task ■ Write about the following topic ■ Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience ■ Write at least 250 words | |
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Topic : You have saved some money to buy yourself a computer. You have been thinking of buying a computer. However, you are quite confused on which kind of computer to buy. Your choice is between a desktop computer and a laptop.notebook. Describe the advantages of the two types of computers. | |
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These days, there are so many types of computers which we are using( available for us) now. Commonly, we can distinguish these computers as to two types. One is desktop computer and another one is laptop computer. In this essay, I will explain the advantages of desktops and laptops.
Laptop computers have many benefits. First of all, laptop computers look very cool. So when you bring take it to the school or to the office, everyone will look at you and your pretty laptop with envious. with envy( enviously) Secondly, you can comportably move with it wherever you want to go because it has commonly light weight. Finally, laptops are very small than desktops. therefore they need smaller space for storage than desktops.
On the other hand, desktop computers have another advantages compared with laptop computers. First, desktop computer's performance is better than laptop computer if you paid it equally when you buy it. the prices for both are same.. This means desktops are more efficient than laptops by cost aspect. in a sense of cost.. Secondly, desktops have more expandable space. so you can easily add additional devices such as video graphic cards, better cooling systems, more powerful power supplies, and so on. Lastly, more easily, you can upgrade parts of your desktops according to your needs. since, parts of desktop computers are commonly cheaper than laptops.
In conclusion, desktops or laptops have their own advantages. so the choosing one of them, desktop or laptop, is depends on user's needs or tastes. In my case, I prefer laptops to better than desktops becase of my requirment. | |
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