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Topic : There is a concern with regard to the growing problem of traffic jams in big cities. Some have proposed that it is better to use public means of transportation to help lessen the problem. Explain the disadvantages of using public transportation and private transportation. | |
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Most of big cities around the world have problems of traffic jam. Some people say that we have to reduce using own cars for to lessen the traffic jam. But another other people say that they still want to use their private vehicles because of their convenience. In this essay, I will explain the disadvantages of using public and private transportation.
There are some disadvantages of using public transportation. Most of majority disadvantage that using public vehicle is inconvenience.(The most famous disadavantage is inconvenience..) First, whenever you go to particular places, you have to wait for a bus or a subway at the station until they arrived . As you know, it takes short time. However it is very boring time for almost people.( As you know, public transportation is fast but people get bored...) Secondly, there are so many people in on the bus or subway especially during rush hours. Sometimes people in public vehicle with rush hours look like soldiers in warfare. (Rushing people on the public transportation look like fugitives sometimes scare me a lot..) Everyone in there is pushing each other toughly. Lastly, you must transport one vehicle to another vehicle for going to places where you want. (transfer) It is also very inconvenience(inconvenient) , too.
Same as above, there are also some disadvantages of using private transportation. First of all, using private vehicle caused of air pollution.( First of all, driving own cars(automobiles) make air pollution more serious..) Whenever you are driving your car, you are always making harmful gases or dirts. It is bad not only for car owner but also for our valuable earth. Secondly, driving own car need more money than using public transportation to maintain their cars such as buy gases, repair of parts, car insurance, and so on. It is more costly to drive own cars as people have to pay for maintenance costs such as ....)
Lastly, you will be in trouble when you go out using your car without informations of parking spaces. In most metro cities, there are not enough parking spaces compared with number of cars.
To summurize, there are some disadvantages of using public and private transportation. Using one of them may depends on user's particular situation. However, we try to use public transportation as many as possible to prevent air pollution for our lovely earth.
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