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The bar graph illustrates the quantity amount of minutes of telephone calls in the United Kingdom over a span of 17 years>> from when to when ?. The given types of calls shown are Local, National and international, and Mobiles.>> 목록들 전부 소문자 해주세요
During the given period, Local >> local 은 형용사입니다 was the greatest number in the telephone calls. It was gradually increasing increased gradually from 70 billion minutes>> 얼마까지 증가했죠? in 1995, after peaking at 90 billion minutes in 1999. >> 이렇게 쓰면 1999년에 90 billion mibutes 달성한 후에 1995년에 증가했다는 말이 됩니다 Starting from the top, it steadily decreased steadily >> 부사는 동사 뒤에서 수식합니다 by about 70 billion minutes at the end of the survey period. When it comes to National and international, it steadily rose steadily from about 38 billion minutes in 1995 to nearly 50 billion minutes in 2002 with no noticeable changes. Mobiles started with the lowest number of uses >> 사용 횟수에 대한 얘기가 아닙니다 in telephone call, however but >> however는 접속사의 역할을 못해 두 문장을 이어주지 못합니다 it showed the fastest growth among the given call types.
The use of local>> ?? local 은 형용사입니다 has maintained the number one during highest for the given period, but it showed the downward trend from the year 1999 >> 이건 오버뷰입니다 오버뷰는 본론의 첫머리에 쓰죠. In contrast, the others presented the upward trends >> 역시 오버뷰입니다. Overall, the gap between two fixed lines, which were about 30 billion minutes at first, 문장 사이에 which 절이 들어가면 콤마로 나눠주세요 has narrowed narrowed down only about 10 billion minutes at last.
결론에 어울리는 구절이 들어있지 않습니다 그냥 형용사만 쓰인 것도 있고 Local , National 이 아닌 모두 소문자로 쓰셔야 합니다 위에 표시한 곳들 봐주시길 바랍니다
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