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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of secondary school students who were surveyed on subject preference in Europe in 1997. At first glance, drama was the most popluar subjecty for both boys and girls, while mathematics and history were the least popluar one for young students.
As seen in the graph, the preference were roughly the same in scinece, German and mathematics. However, in other subjects, there were some noticeable differences, over 20 percent of girls expressed their most interest in music, which was much higher that the boys. The figure was greater that than? English ats over 20 percent.
On the other hand, boys liked geography and accounting the most. The preference rate of 35 percent in geography was almost doubled that of the girls, and the figure for accounting was also significantly higher. Overall, although the responses variedy according to personal interest or ability, most students appear to enjoyu drama and science.
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