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Recently, there is a heated debate on the priority (aime의 동의어로 사용할 수 없는 단어 입니다) of university education in Korea. Some say that getting a good or highly paid job is the main reason (무엇을 위한 main reason인가요?) while others insist that there is more than just a good job.
This essay will discuss both points of views and suggest my own opinion.
It is certainly true the university education plays a really important role in our career path. We can enhance our competitiveness as an expert in certain area and usually claim higher salary to a company with a bachelor degree. Therefore, admittedly, most people pay an expensive tuition fee to university and invest 3 or 4 years in a lecture room after high school.
In this light, it I is undeniable that a better job is the aim of university education.
On the other hand, some other people contend that promising a better occupation is just one a (one/a 둘 중에 하나만 선택) part of many benefits of university education.
For individuals who are willing to learn deeper and wider range of knowledge or a certain academic area, the education service of university is the best option as there are not many institutes or entities which can provide the high level of education that university does.
In addition, our society also benefits significantly from university education because university graduates with more experiences and higher academic abilities could contribute to our society in different ways than from those who do not have a degree.
In my opinion, both views have reasonable points and it is not a good idea to define the aim of university education.
However, one point which is very clear to me is the fact that our society as well as individuals can be improved a lot through the learning and experiences from university.
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