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Reading
newspapers and following the news on TV could be difficult to young people. (여기는 조금 바꿔주셔야 하는데, 언급된 사항이 젊은 층에게 어려운 것이 문제가 되는 게 아니라, 이들이 그렇게 하지 않는 것이 문제입니다. 둘은 조금 다르죠.) In
this regard, I will discuss what the causes are and how to solute about them.
One
of the main reasons that young people hesitate to read newspapers and watch news
on TV is because most of the newspapers and news only regard their news as political issues. Therefore therefore, it might seem to be boring to young people. Also, most news on TV
are broadcasting broadcast at a limited time such as morning and night hours. Thus, most of
the young people could be working or sleeping during the time that news are broadcasting shown on
TV. Finally, to handle newspapers is may be difficult to young people because
most of the newspapers have big widths also, due to development smart phone,
many young people have smart phones and they mainly read newspapers through the
smart phones. (문단의 초반부와 비슷한 맥락에서, 다른 내용이 올 때에는 새로운 문장으로 끊어갈 수 있어야 합니다.) Consequently, reading a newspaper and following news on TV could
be problems when young people read them because of their information, limited
time and inconvenience.
When
it comes to say about the solutions of these problems, firstly, most of the news
company related companies should devote their time to make the provide (make 와는 다른 개념입니다. make 를 사용하게 될 경우 뉴스 조작이 되겠죠.) issues that young people like such
as entertainment issues because these issues would exert an extremely positive
influence to read on the younger generation to read or watch the news. Secondly, many young people will
be more interested if politics and current affairs are dealt with in cartoons
rather than in writing. Finally, smaller newspapers should be made small for young
people to carry rather than current. Thus, making newspaper as small, widespread
news time on TV and interesting issues would attract to young people to read. (위에도 그렇고 굳이 다시 한번 요약할 필요는 없긴 하지만, 만약에 요약시 본론 문단에 언급된 순서로 해주세요~)
In
conclusion, there are many causes of the phenomenon that only a few young people read a newspaper and
follow news on TV. I assume that if news company solute the problems of reading
newspapers and following news on TV for young people properly, young people might
like reading and watching them.
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