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In
urban life, people get quickly exhausted by commuting, because it is hard to
endure the time spent in how busy the passengers in the public transportations. Or, even if they
have their car, they tend to be stuck in stick in the road for a few hours. In that
perspective, some people might think that building more houses or accommodations
is essential than keeping city gardens or parks. Meanwhile, others disagree with this. In the following, both views and my own opinion will be discussed thoroughly However, I mostly can't
entirely agree with the latter as follows.
On
the other hand, some Some people spend their lives while packed with strangers on a
subway or bus, which influences negatively on the quality of people (사람 자체의 질에 영향을 주는 것은 아니겠죠.). In recent
research, scientists have proved that the commuting time correlates to the level of
happiness. It is hardly ignored by the fact that people quickly get depressed
and stressed out by lacking leisure time. (이 문단은 다시 작성해주셔야 합니다. 총평에서 말씀드릴게요.)
On
the other hand, a city with greenery places renders people healthy, both mentally
and physically. Strolling with dogs helps the owners increase mental fitness by
reducing the level of stress. Also, gardens and parks in the centre of the
cities reduce the a high level of CO2 and Carbon Dioxide coming from the cars on
the roads. Since plants function as an environmental filter that alters Co2 or
CO into O2, the greenery areas in the cities make the air much cleaner. In the
longer term, those facilities keep the citizen healthy.
In
conclusion, I believe that protecting parks and gardens in the city is much
more crucial than increasing the number of living places. This is because it
has a high possibility of sustaining people's happy lives mentally and
physically. |