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It is common that different races live in one country. Some people believe that this can contribute to national growth early (faster 와는 의미 차이가 꽤 있습니다.), while others think that it does not affect to make a better country. I strongly agree with that success of a country depends on this diversity. The reasons will be discussed in this essay in detail.
Firstly, a country will have a better decision-making process because they (문단에 처음 등장하는 대상이 대명사로 쓰여서는 안 됩니다.) can communicate directly with people with broad perspectives. It is similar to living in one online world. People in this world join a website and actively participate in decision making. For example, they do not just watch news online, they make comments on it as well too. Moreover, these comments are made from many different countries. It does not even take so long. If this also happens in some countries in the real world, it will benefit them when they make decisions on controversial issues. Thus, having international members in a society encourages development.
Secondly, a country will have better members of society that are reliable. Different from an online world, people’s life continues in the real world. Because of this, their ways of communication are more complicated. There are starts and ends. If they argue with someone, they have to end the conflict anyway, or otherwise their relationship may come to an end their relationship ends. People online might simply unplug if they do not want to talk. However, people offline have to see the same families and neighbors on and on. If these people live with diverse people, they might be able to learn more from each other and help to be a good person.
Lastly, a country will have better living standards because people will be treated equally there. Actually, this is a byproduct of good communication among people living in one society. Where many kinds of people are gathered, usually there are both more privileged and less privileged people. There will be people voice to protect themselves (여기는 댓글 한번 주세요! 아니면 영작 실력은 좋으시니까 dhll님께서 직접 수정하셔도 무방하고요.), and their society will become to create policies to protect them as well too. This leads to make a better society. Being a good place to live for everyone would be the best possible level of development a country can reach. Thus, being international is powerful in a global world.
In conclusion, some people say that international culture of a nation can speed up development, while others insist that it has a little influence. I believe that the open culture greatly helps countries grow because people themselves first will try hard to make the first contribution. |