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some people say that arts subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that all students regardless of education level should be forced to learn arts subjects because someone related to education and students' parents would think that the quality of their childhood’s life can be improved in the future and develop their sense of art, if they understand artistic things in our live. However, I firmly believe that arts subjects what mentioned before must not be made compulsory for high school students. This is because they already are under the stress due to lots of tasks they should study and this could lead to their health problem.
To begin with, the period of high school is very important for high school students because what university they will study at is decided at the time. To achieve their goal that they want to enter a famous university, they have to study everyday from morning to late night. Moreover, they need to more focus on studying subjects like literature, math, science, society and so on that the its weight are heavier on the assessment of university admission.
On top of that, parents may consider art subjects like a painting as mental treatments because there are so many cures utilizing music, painting and smell so on in society. Moreover, it makes them to feel a sense of achievement and develop their intelligence, then will affect to their performance in a positive way. However, they overlook one thing. By investing more and more time on studying, students could not develop their physical. In other words, unlike parents’ thought, it will cause the obesity and bend of backbone because of holding the same position for too long time.
To sum up, although we may be able to understand the intention of student’s parents, do not give more burden in physical and emotional way to them by making compulsory subjects.