To begin with, students need to learn various subjects in their secondary school. The first First and foremost reason is because, they should be educated about general knowledge. To be specific, most elementary schools provide basic information from how to write and speak to simple mathematics. Of course, it is true that their curriculum does not interfere with our lives. However, in order to function in society, it is essential to know more knowledge like understanding the economic situation or the process of trial. These things are too difficult for young children, aged from about 8 to 13, to learn, so that it is suitable for middle school ages.
총평: 논제가 생략되었는데, 댓글로 논제를 적어주시면 확인 후 논제와 적합한지 답변 드리겠습니다. 일단 겉으로 보기에는 크게 문제는 없어보이네요!
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