As for the way to alleviate this problem, first and foremost, museums and historical sites need to redecorate and take place hold various events. Citizens would pay more attention to better conditions and diverse kinds of events and then visit there to enjoy new exhibit and experience their own historical events. Secondly, museums or governments also could provide some financial benefits financially to local residents. For example, they should be able to enter these places with in a lower price than other people or they should are able to use car parking space for free. It is the effective way to give a motivation to visit there.
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