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■ You should spend about 40 minutes on this task ■ Present a written argument or case to an educated reader no special knowledge of?the?following topic ■ You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant ???evidence ■ You should write at least 250 words | |
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Topic : Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable? Use specific examples to support your preference. | |
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There are some people say that family and friends are the best teachers sometimes to learn about life sometimes. On the other hand, some people prefer to learn about personal life through one's own experience. These two ways of learning life have advantages are advantageous to us. In my opinion case, I would learn a my life through my own personal experience. This article I will talk about the advantages for each case.
Firstly, we could listen hear a variety of stories from the family and friends. The family, particularly especially the elderly, have lived for a long time with abundant experiences and have gone through a bunch of experience. Also, a person who has lots of friends could get much advice because all of his friends have experienced the different styles of in his life. As a result, the variable various advice from the family and companions might be so useful knowledge when we meet the difficulty.
Secondly, there is a saying, 'A thousand hearings are not worth one seeing.' It means, even though we listen to much advice from other people, it is worthless unless if we do not experience. When we listen the other's experiences, it is easy to understand for us at the moment. However, when we once meet difficulty, we would never forget since our body instinctively remember that situation and how to solve it -> it is difficult to solve the problems because the indirect experiences heard from others can not become our own things to resolve these difficulties.
This is the reason why I am absolutely persuade of prefer that personal experience is the best solution advice for learning the life.
Consequently, there are still advantages in both ways of learning the life through others and personal experience. From my point of view, I prefer to learn a life through a personal an individual experience because seeing is more valuable than listening the other's knowledge. |
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