■ You should spend about 40 minutes on this task ■ Present a written argument or case to an educated reader no special knowledge of?the?following topic ■ You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant ???evidence ■ You should write at least 250 words | |
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Topic : Technology makes children less creative.
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Opinion might vary on the issue of whether technology prevents children from improving creativity. Personally, I entirely disagree with this idea for two reasons. First, advanced today offer many items which makes new things possible. In addition, technology enables children to access information easier.
First of all, technology gives people source of possibility for creative development. Creativity starts copying and transformation. Thing what is modified from being thing is easier than thing what is created from nothing. So, some people say that copying is mother of creation. In this regard, children are exposed better environment for creation. Today already achieves technological advance and growing creativity to better future is possible. For example, invention of computer makes it possible to create various goods, such as monitor, keyboard and printer. Then people who need more convenience invent other ware. In this context, because there are many sources to copying and modifying, technology helps children create more things.
Besides, advanced technology enables children to learn more knowledge easily. These days, children access the information easily by improved technology, such as the Internet, a PDP and a cell phone. When I think a new idea, I can immediately find related information and record contents. It makes it possible to that I materialize the issue. Some people think that online information is not check by government authorities for correctness and validity. However, it is a task to do that people choose information reliably. There are many advantage of online information better than disadvantage of it. In this regard, Information by improvement of technology helps children to develop their idea.
To summarize, technology makes children more creative. Above all, today offer children more chance by possibility of creation. Second, it helps children learn more information. For these reasons, children can develop their creativity by improved technology. | |
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