■ You should spend about 40 minutes on this task ■ Present a written argument or case to an educated reader no special knowledge of?the?following topic ■ You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant ???evidence ■ You should write at least 250 words | |
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Topic : Much attention is given to how movie stars spend their money. Many people resent their extravagant mannet of spending. Justifying their disagreement with the argument that there are many starving people around the world. Do you think people should resent movie stars because they have a lot of money? Discuss your argument/s and cite relevant examples. | |
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In this world, there are various people who have their own place in their society. Furthermore it is true that there is a gap between a movie star and those who are starving as the statement above. In this situation, some people resent the spending habit of movie stars while there are some people starving. In my opinion, people should not resent at movie stars. In this article, I will discuss about the movei star's spending manner involves with those who are starving.
Firstly, I disagree with people who resent because I do not think the movie stars had a lot of money when they were unknown actors and actresses. They might have made an exdeavor to be famous for a long time. Because of an effort lots of money could be a reward.
Second, there are quite many movie stars who donate their own money to those who are starving. With this reason, I strongly criticize those who resent the movie stars. For instance, since it is so difficult to be a famous actor/actress in Korea, they know the delight of donation.
Lastly, from my point of view, I would resent those who do not try anything to earn money and so on. I think, people in this world are fair to anything. If people give their effort and do their best, they could get anything they want in my opinion. As a result, whether people to be rich or not, it is dependant on mind.
To summarize, even though there are some movie stars who spend the money uselessly, there are still those who donate their money in good ways. Also, in my opinion, how people get enough money to survive is up to people's will. Because of these several reasons, people should stop resenting the movie stars. People should resent those who do not try anything at all. | |
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