■ You should spend about 40 minutes on this task ■ Present a written argument or case to an educated reader no special knowledge of?the?following topic ■ You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant ???evidence ■ You should write at least 250 words | |
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Topic : In modern society, schools are no longer necessary for study, children can use the Internet which provides a wider range if information. Hence, children do not have to go to school but can study at home.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. | |
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The school life is really good to students and adults too. It can affect your whole life as well. However there are two opposite sides. One is we should go to school and the other is we do not need to do it. Then, do we better to go to get the lesson in the school? In my opinion, we should go to school because there is a great amount of benefits when we take a class in the school.
Firstly, we do not just have an examination subject in the school. The communications is important as much as school subjects. If you just study in the house, then you can be easy to worry about relation with others. Moreover, we can make friends and learn understanding, friendship and respect which can not be learnt by family or teachers. For example, sometimes we have the problems which is hard to tell your parents or teachers. At that time, we can discuss it with friends. They will definitely respect your thoughts and listen to your voice. After that, the problem will be gone. Besides, your friendship will greatly build.
Secondly, we can find our own talent through the school activities. Some students have the different abilities of sports, discuss, chess or playing instruments. The school helps the student finds their aptitude which it is hard to know themselves. For instance, one boy has low powers of concentration about the class work and get into finance difficult but he plays the piano amazingly. Thus, the school teachers try to find the musical competition for him. Also, They are going to help to increase his capability. In this case, in the school we can develope our efficiency and solve the finance problem. Meanwhile, we can not resolve it in the home or on the internet.
Finally, there are lots of advantages when we go to school like communications, friends and own capacity. Therefore, we must go to school. In addition, if the plenty of the special purpose school will be build, the government and the company are easy to hire the employees who take a high quality of education. For that reason, the economics will be active. | |
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