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■ You should spend about 40 minutes on this task ■ Write about the following topic ■ Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience ■ Write at least 250 words | |
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Topic : There are current debates regarding the usage of uniforms in school. In your opinion, is it a better policy for schools to require students to wear uniforms? Why or why not? Support opinion with examples and/or explanations. | |
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There are many discussions about wearing school uniforms in Korea. In my case, I wore school uniforms when I was middle-school student to high-school student. So I can have experiences about this topic during that period. Therefore I will write my opinion according to my experiences.
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Firstly, school uniforms make a student feel more proud of their school.(일관성있게해주세요, a student 단수랑 their복수랑 섞이지 않게) most of poeple feel the unity when they are wearing same clothes. Same as this fact, students can feel the unity and have a proud of their school. This fact is proved by a survey, Korea Common Behavior Survey by Best-and-Perfect Researcher. According to this survey, almost 80% of people answered that they feel the unity and proud when they are wearing same clothes. Constrastingly, 20% of people answered that they don't.
Secondly, we can expect to prevent from a crime of student by wearing shcool uniforms. If student don't wear a uniform s, they can easily buy cigarettes or alcoholic liquids at the convenience store and also they can easily enter the pub or night club for a drink. In my private opinion, drink some alcoholic liquid, not very much, is not bad for students although they are students. but heavily drunk make a crime circumstantces for the students. For example, My close friend in high school argued fought with someone after he heavily drunk. He was accidently hitting him. Then, unfortunately, the guy who got hit hitted by my friend was died dropped dead so my friend went to is in prison until now.(my friend accidently killed a man..) I know that there are another reasons to cause this accident happended. However, If my friend wore the school uniform and he couldn't get a drink so easily. He maybe not be in trouble like now.then
In conclusion, by above survey and experience, I suggest to government that students should wear school uniforms. | |
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