Some people think that the most precious time in individual’s life is when they are teenagers. However, in my opinion, there are a number of crucial things which are able to enrich people’s lives permanently in one’s twenties. This is because, after individual’s teens, plenty of people start to recognize who they are and, furthermore, decide from small deals to big ones which can be a major, job and so on.
To begin with, one’s twenties is a term to suffer from an identity crisis. Indeed, people start to consider their future more seriously so that this period is the most considerably significant moment to dominate one’s life considerably. According to a research by CNN, more than 80 percent of students, who have guided how to build one’s identities through a lecture called identity implementation, turned out the people who have stable personality and, furthermore, the leader of group with a society adaptation ability. The research has showed that people who they are ready to get through over twenties by knowing about themselves are easily able to achieve stable emotion and settle down in one’s society.
On top of that, the one’s twenties not only guide people’s identities but also let people step in their fist ground as a job. As usual, people look for a first job after graduation so that this is the first route to develop their own career. Thus, this period is required to deeply know about the job whether it is suitable or not. From my personal experience, when I was a freshman in the a university, I could not make sure about my major which I have not thought through well in order to get a proper job in the future. Fortunately, my professor who took charge of me guided what kind of major is suitable for me and introduced me various other choices in order to obtain a better result for my future career. After all, I found employment as a designer which makes me satisfactory over the other jobs.
To sum up, in the term of twenties, people should make vital decisions for their own highly satisfactory future. In this regard, I firmly believe that, the most essential moment in individual’s life is one’s twenties.
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