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It is better to have friends who are similar to you than those who are different from you. Do you agree or disagree?
There are some people who strongly think that people should make a relationship with whom they are not familiar with in order to achieve acquire more lectures by knowing many other thoughts or technologies. However, in my opinion, keeping friends who are related to ones is more beneficial to keep relationships smoothly and, furthermore, have a great time in comfort. This is because, the friends who are like prefer to ones are increasingly likely to share a common stuff and comprehend own thier thoughts easily reducing an unnecessary argument.
To begin with, from the old school, people eat little few kinds of meals, wear simple clothes in microcosm and have the same thoughts. There were not many different choices. However, in our modern, complicated society, as the increasing different types of people’s preference for a satisfactory life, the trend improves people’s style too outstanding not to get along with others whom has different taste. So Therefore, that it is crucial to find one who have the same interest. From my personal experience, I am glad to share my favorite things such as, shopping and watching a movie. However, after hanging out with some of friends who do not like spending time on shopping or watching a movie what I want to do, I realized that there was not a middle ground to share to talk and was not fun at all, even though, they used to be my best friends. Fortunately, I found a friend who has the same interest with me. Indeed, when we hang out, I always have fun with her, sharing our favorite things. Thus, it is obviously advantageous to have familiar friends in order to gather 목적어가 필요합니다
On top of that, having a similar friend not only has a benefit to share the same habits but also makes the relationship well. As usual, people who have the same thought would be understandable with someone who has the same theory. This is because, personally when people see one problem, they try to see through in their own opinion. Thus, if people get along with similar ones, it would be much easier to avoid a fight or an argument. According to a research by CNN, more than 90 percent of couples who have married with someone who have a similar cultural background, are significantly satisfied with their own marriage. On the other hand, other couples said that they still struggle to overcome a cultural gap and often argue after being married. This is obviously true that it is hard to get along with somebody from a different background and also often cause an argument often.
To sum up, I do firmly believe that there are a number of advantages to have someone who has a similar background as a friend.
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