▶ Your Answer :
There is no doubt that the early stage of life is critical
for development of human. While some people argue that children should remain in
education system until eighteen, other people assert that they should be
exposed to diverse experiences. I shall discuss both point of views and will
give my opinion.
It is evident that the guidance from parents and teachers
plays an important role for children. Young children in particular, tend to
lose their directions without proper instruction. Not only does this affect
their personalities, but also destructive to the society as a whole. For
example, there are many students committing violence and causing youth-crime
due to the lack of education. Therefore, it is necessary to teach them until
they become an adult, so that they can make right decision and take
responsibility on their own.
On the other hand, there is an argument that the exposure to
various range of experience enables young people to act independently and
expedite their self-esteem. Furthermore, allowing them to engage in real world
would bring positive effects on society. As an example, if a student stays in the
education system, they may lose their creativity because of the frame that the
school provides. But if they have own choice to make, they would learn how the
responsibility follows to their decision.
In my opinion, there are equal numbers of pro and con on
both views. Therefore, I believe that the best choice for this is that school
system should have a variety range of educational source for young people so
that they can absorb advantages of current education system as well as experiences
from the outside of world.
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