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You have just moved into a
new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may
disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your
neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for
the party
invite your neighbour to
come
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write
any addresses.
Begin your letter as
follows:
Dear ................ ,
Dear Mr Lee
My name is YKim, who did the contract with your flat at 27E Rowe
Street. I am writing this letter to inform you with regards to your accommodations. >> 주소는 굳이 안 써도 된다고 명시가 됐구요 숙소에 관해서 문의하는 것이 아니라 파티를 열 것에 대해서 물어보는 것이므로 home-coming party 를 이용해서 하시면 좋겠네요
Firstly, sofa's leg has a been broken leg , which makes my body to tilt toward
left side. Not only that, a table at a living room makes horrible sounds,
whenever I place anything on top of it. This is just a burden to our family. It
seems nails are aged and>> 무슨 말이죠? produces unpleasant noises. More importantly, the wardrobe
at the largest room does not have a handle. To open this, I really need to take
some efforts by , with hurting my fingers. Lastly, spring of the mattress in my son’s room has a
came out on the bottom. I can clearly say that it happened before I
moved in, because my son has not used this room.
For these troubles, I really need your argent help. I want the a new sofa
and a mattress to be replaced with new one. For the wardrobe and the table,
it will >> if 절 동사가 현재면 주절 조동사도 현재입니다 be kind of you, if you send a person to repair them. I know I should be the one who should have noticed during the
inspection. As to these matters, I personally want to say sorry for the unfortunate
news.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you with suitable resolution.
Yours sincerely,
YKim.
225자
오프토픽입니다 주제는 파티에 관련된 내용인데 완전히 다른 내용을 쓰셨네요 기본 문법도 틀린 부분이 많습니다
Task Achievement - 4 Coherence and Cohesion - 6 Lexical Resource - 6 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5
5.0 예상합니다
Some
people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person
how to be a good parent.
Do
you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to
be a good parent.
Give
reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
Write
at least 250 words.
It is said that
the education is a significant factor in developing children’s personality. This
idea initiated some people to think teaching the young “how to become a good
parent” at a school. For such a phenomenon, I firmly believe that young people
with skills to be a fine learning skills by their parents is essential for young people. Nowadays, the
news on child abuse is frequently broadcasted. The modern technology brought
the heavy stresses on the world with dire competitions. The offensive side cause of
child abuse is mostly by the adults, often they are such as parents. For instance, there
was a horrible incident in Korea. The accident involves is that a stepmother killed
her stepdaughter by breaking bones and bullying>> by breaking bones 는 모호하네요 뼈를 부러뜨린 행동을 서술해주시는게 좋습니다. Consequently, this consequently made a catastrophic
result, the death of the young girl>> 이미 앞에 말한 내용이네요. This shocked the Korean society with
parents’ aptitude with cherishing their children >> 무슨 말인지 모르겠네요. If the proper education is
done with the killer from young age, this crisis has been will not be avoided happened. The ethical responsibility
is one of the major characteristics that an adult should have. However, it is not
hard to find an elder person without such a personality>> 책임감이 성격일까요?. Respectful parents are
often viewed as a role model for their children. Moreover, there are a lot of
researches have done with relationship between a parent and their son or
daughter. The result depicts the fact that a child tends to do what their
parents do. This conveys the importance of being an adorable parent.
To sum up, a
great parent is outcome of children with moral identities>> 부모가 아이의 결과물인가요?. Developments of characteristics
at early life can bring out the result the world full of respective people.
Thus, I strongly believe educating a child to be a good parent at school must
be accounted for the better future.
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이 글도 오프토픽입니다 주제를 읽어보고 다시 한 번 읽어보시길 바랍니다 단어도 적절하게 사용되지 않았습니다 Task Achievement - 5 Coherence and Cohesion - 5 Lexical Resource - 5 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5 5.0 예상합니다
총점 5.0 예상합니다
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