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Learning different countries in conventional habits and deeds are is>> 주어는 learning~~ 이라 동사는 단수형이 옵니다 requisite factors, when people go abroad. In contrast, a host country should give a welcome against >> for 이 적절합니다 against는 반항하는 의미의 ~에 대하여에 대한 뜻입니다 different culture too>> as well이 적절하겠네요. There are a several arguments according to the topic.
To begin>> to begin with은 한 덩어리로 쓰입니다 begin과 with 사이에 콤마를 안 넣으셔도 돼요 with, scores of people go travelled >> travelled 라고 써주세요 travel 은 동사입니다 on their leave >> 어떤 뜻인지 모르겠습니다. They are inclined to study basal communication in order to enjoy their on vacation. This argument may be true that they savor a memorable experience or trip. >> 이런 성격의 문장은 서론 쪽이 어울립니다 This is because visitors may have an opportunity for making friends, and in the case of hosts, give more hospitable. >> more 다음은 명사가 나옵니다 hospitality 를 의도하셨겠지만 셀 수 없으므로 much가 들어가야하지만 그냥 hospitality만 쓰는게 더욱 좋다고 봅니다 As a result of it, learning a >> 항상 가산명사 앞 관사 주의해주세요 distinct culture or an attitude from visiting country is better than nothing to do doing nothing이 좋겠네요 주어의 ing와 같으면서도 뜻도 알맞습니다.
On the other hand, there are various aspects against these arguments that host countries should accept divergent conventions. To give an example, discrimination may bring about cognition of a host country will be degraded and unvalued to visitors. They have to be equal to host as a humanity. Some people may ignore or taunt to >> 타동사라 전치사 to가 필요없습니다visitors. In the long run, a host country should keep a positive perception, and to be friendly in order to grow up >> grow up은 사람이 성장하는 자라나는 그런 뜻입니다 up 빼주세요 their country.
Personally, I think that there are pros and cons. If host country welcomes culture >> cultural 형용사로 만들어주세요 differences to travelers, Causes of the conflict may not present between people.
In conclusion, visitors should learn differences in cultures and behaviors to a host country even a little, and a host country should open their positive mind in positive.
관사로 인한 실수가 가장 많이 보입니다 빨간 표시한 부분들 잘 봐주시고 문법에 신경도 써주시며 에세인 4문단이면 충분하며 본문 위치에 세 줄을 위해 한 문단을 주지 않습니다 personally 부터는 적절치 않습니다
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