■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :
The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001 | |
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▶ Your Answer :
The three pie charts below illustrate the variation in annual consuming by a particular United Kingdom school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. There are five different salaries given.
First of all, in 1981, there was a outstanding increase in teachers` salaries with 40% and second place was others workers` salaries with 28%. The least remained were resources e.g books and furniture and equipment with 15% respectively, and insurance was minimal only 2%
In addition, in 1999, 50% of teachers` salaries increased gradually more than in the past 1981, whereas 22% of others` salaries decreased gently. The least three types of salaries were under 20%
Moreover, in 2001, both teachers salaries and other workers` salaries declined a little approximately 6% and resource e.g books was as well, while 23% of furniture and equipment steadily rose more than in the past. The least insurance was still minimal 8%
In conclusion, apart from furniture and equipment, four type salaries sank compared to the past for 1981 and 1991. A particular UK school seems to spend salaries for furniture and equipment.
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