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Nowadays, young mothers are interested in
the English kindergartens for their children and focused on English education.
Many people have a great variety of opinions in property age for studying foreign
languages. This essay will discuss both views and answer the given question.
On the negative side, early learning might
have some disadvantages. Once, early education of the >> 언어 앞에 the를 붙이지 않습니다 English is an obstacle to study
mother tongue. It is possible to make children confused from learning such as pronunciations and
structures when children start to study native language. Moreover, it disturbs
to introduced the cultural identity>> 왜 문화적 정체성을 소개하는 데에 방해를 할까요?.
On the positive side, dispite some possible
downsides, there are crucial benefits. Firstly, there is time to spare for spend on studying
English when they are younger such as from 5 to 7 years old. These days, adults also spend
their time for on learning English such as TOEIC for finding gaining their jobs. It means
English is a very important thing in modern society. Furethermore, It is better
to pick up English when they have much time as kids. >> 아이일 때 가르친다는 내용으론 포함하기 힘들 듯 싶습니다 중학교 고등학교에 가서도 공부할 수 있다는 여지를 남겨두는 의견 같습니다
Secondly, in study >> 연구라는 뜻의 study는 단수 취급입니다, it is much more
effective to learn languages below 12 years old. In particular, English has
much different structures to Korean, so and we are always confused by grammar or making
sentences. If kids study much ealier, they can prevent the these problems.
When all is said and done >> all 이 뭔가요?, I firmly believe
that advantages of learning English ealier for children can surpass the
disadvantages. Although learning a foreign language earlier is not good at learning
mother togue and cultural identity but young children has good ability to pick
up the English. >> although는 접속사로 혼자 문장을 이끌 수 없습니다 뒤나 앞에 주절이 나와야 합니다 On the other hand, they will avoid the hardship of learning in the
future.
English라는 단어보단 the language를 사용해서 한 두번이라도 English를 줄여줬으면 합니다 위에 빨간 표시한 부분들 봐주시구요 궁금증을 낳지 않는 글을 쓰는 연습을 해주시길 바랍니다
Task Achievement - 7 Coherence and Cohesion - 6 Lexical Resource - 6 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 6 6.0 예상합니다
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