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With the prevalence of public schools, people's attention to coeducational school has become a focal point of consideration. Some people advocate that separation of genders in schools benefit to students, while others assert that mixed schools have more merits. I wholeheartedly agree with the latter, regarding the long-term effect for students.
To begin with, the main deliberation of supporting the separate gender schools is derived from the social scientists. >> 제시하신 테스크 어디에도 scientists 에 관한 내용은 없고 굳이 이렇게 말 할 필요 없이 누구는 이렇게 말했다 식으로 하면 됩니다 They opine that different genders requires different needs, so that the divergent diverse ways of approaching from teachers is necessary for the effective education. To elaborate, giving an example on a class to describe a certain theory For example, boys may find it engaging when cited with sports and girls with dramas >> 어떤 수업적인 것이 더 좋겠습니다 boys prefer physical education, but girls do not 갑자기 drama 는 학교에서 선생님이란 범위까지 축소했는데 나올 항목이기엔 약간 부적절한게 아닐까 생각했습니다. Thus, different addressing methods to make lecture interesting is indispensible are essential in addressing pupils.
Despite the manifest advantage of separate gender education, the benefits of coeducational schools must not be neglected On the other hand, the competition in mixed-sex school represents the real-societal competition. By way of illustration, individuals in the society compete each other with the absence of gender separation to promote themselves. Respect to this manner, real-life social competition skills can be obtained through coeducational schooling.>> by way of illustration은 예시를 나타내기에 설명이 없게 됐습니다
After taking into account all the considerations, the benefits of mixed-sex schools outweighs the single gender schools in the respect of the social aspect for educational purposes.
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