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Today, people argue about who the people gives students more lessons: people who they live with or who they meet at school. In my opinion, people who affect more to kids more are their friends and teachers than ,not parents.
Somehow, parents take more important role of in kids' lives because they are the only one watching children for a long time and knowing them well. As teachers always want to meeting with students' parents, parents can control kids or at least they can be people giving advice to teachers. Also, in Korean culture, people say that parents ask their kids to educator 이해가 안되는 문장입니다. That means the biggest and the most important decision related to students are decided by their parents.
However, the more lessons are got from school since their houses are their places.이해가 안되는 문장입니다 Firstly, from my own experience, teenagers usually relieve their stress at home to their parents, and people call this as puberty. Their parents are there only for them and the most comfortable people while school comes as a practice for society to them. In addition, students mostly learn lessons by own experiences. In comparison to home, parents only give children nice words or sometimes scolding (which is still better than bitter experience) <-괄호 사용 x. For young people, experience makes them realistic by actually facing it just like Korean proverb "more bitter medicine is better for your health."
In conclusion, the only society, (<- no comma) and school, (<- no comma) helps teenagers more to grow mentally, though the longest advisors, parents, (<- no comma) can also help.
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