The given two maps compare and contrast a particular island, before and after the development for tourism. As can be seen from the data, the total length of the island is approximately 250 meters.
Looking at the first map, there were only about the tropical trees before the construction, with a beach in the west; the island was a completely the natural area without any man made things.
On the other hand, the recent map illustrates a variety of amenities. The island has had have two areas of accommodation. The one is in the west to in the beach, while the other area is in the centre of the island. Between them, a restaurant, where people can enjoy a meal and a reception, which is surrounded by a vehicle track also have been built.
In terms of activities tourists can enjoy, in the southern sea of the island, they can go sailing through a at the pier. Furthermore, they are able to swim at the beach in the west by passing a footpath, which connect the western accommodation units. <(footpath 는 east and west에 둘다 있습니다. 다른 문장에 따로 설명해주시면 더 좋을 것 같습니다.)
Overall, although the island has been refurnished significantly, it is interesting to note the fact that the old trees remain the same.
Score: 7
Comment: 문법에 신경을 조금 더 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고 하셨습니다.